Revised writing (5)

When turning in a paper to an English A.P. teacher you better believe that he’s going to read it and then comment about it to you. Which is exactly what happened when I turned it my rhetorical analysis essay entitled “V for vendetta” This essay has been one of the most challenging essay that I’ve written in a while. Upon the teacher returning my paper to me I realized I had a few minor mistakes that needed to be fixed. Which included spelling errors, run-ons, fragments, incomplete thoughts, overloading paragraphs, and rigid endings to some of my sentences. Overall I believe I did well on this paper but as you can see there is still a lot of stuff that I need to pay more attention to before I assume my paper is complete.